Talk:Italian battleship Vittorio Veneto/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 09:23, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this over the weekend.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 09:23, 4 April 2014 (UTC)
- No major issues.
- No DABs and external links good.
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Swordfish is one of those words that is both singular and plural, so no "es" ending.
- Fixed.
- No overlinking.
- Isn't Bagnasco published Barnsley rather than just S. Yorkshire?
- Yeah, though oddly, the isbn I used is entered in Worldcat as Yorkshire: Naval Institute Press. Must have been entered wrong on their end.
- Adding |lastauthoramp=1 to your book cites will get them to match the format of your multiple author cites.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:41, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
- Added - I need to remember to do this more frequently. Thanks for your review Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 10:07, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
- Almost forgot, do you know when the radar was added? 1943, IIRC, but you might have a more precise date to hand.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:51, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
- I'm sure Bagnasco & De Toro have a precise date - I'll check it later. I have to go through and add more from their book before this goes to ACR/FAC anyway. Parsecboy (talk) 13:42, 9 April 2014 (UTC)
- Looks like "July 1943" is the most precise we're going to get. Parsecboy (talk) 18:44, 12 April 2014 (UTC)
- I'm sure Bagnasco & De Toro have a precise date - I'll check it later. I have to go through and add more from their book before this goes to ACR/FAC anyway. Parsecboy (talk) 13:42, 9 April 2014 (UTC)