Talk:It Don't Matter/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:09, 18 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @The Rambling Man. Apologies if I am missing something here, but ... whats the status of this review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Completely dropped off my radar. I'll get to it in the next few days. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 12:07, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Could link disk jockey.
"was handled by the latter" OHYES and Alok? Might be confusing, perhaps split.
"done by" made by? "done" is grim.
"was issued before the original track's release on 6 May 2021 by Controversia" -> "was issued the day before the original track's release by Controversia"
"travelling over the world" around rather than over?
"joy[...] of touring" -> "joy ... of touring" (non-breaking space before the ellipsis.

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for your review, I have adressed your comments! Could you possibly do the last comment for me? I don't think I fully understand what you mean. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:04, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]