Talk:It's Elementary: Talking About Gay Issues in School/GA1
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Reviewer: RunningTiger123 (talk · contribs) 03:48, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
I'll be back in a little while with my comments after reading the article and its sources. RunningTiger123 (talk) 03:48, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
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Comments:
- 1a
- There are four sentences that I found use
... and it ...
. These sentences should either be split (with theand
deleted), or a comma should be added beforeand
to make a proper compound sentence. - The list
New York, Madison, Wisconsin, Cambridge, Massachusetts, and San Francisco
should use semicolons to separate the locations, i.e.New York; Madison, Wisconsin; Cambridge, Massachusetts; and San Francisco
. This distinguishes the commas that simply divide cities and states. - Wikilink
New York
for consistency, and wikilinkAmerican Family Association
at its first occurrence instead of its second.
- There are four sentences that I found use
- 2a
- Use a consistent author naming style in citations:
First Last
orLast, First
, but not a mix. (I personally prefer the latter.)
- Use a consistent author naming style in citations:
- 2b
- Quote in second paragraph of Summary and background is from an unclear source; readers won't immediately know if it's from source 5 or 6.
- Other comments: As a film, a link to the relevant IMDb page under an External links section might be helpful for readers.
Overall, a really good article! RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:36, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- RunningTiger123 I fixed the issues, but I used First Last for the references. SL93 (talk) 04:59, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
- No worries about that – consistency is the key thing. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:47, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Changes are all good; passing shortly. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:47, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
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