Talk:Ira Valentine

Ira Valentine has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 22, 2023. (Reviewed version).

A news item involving Ira Valentine was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the In the news section on 12 July 2022.

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GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 16:57, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

I changed the weight in the infobox from 210 to 212 to match PFA and PFR
"letter-of-intent" link to National Letter of Intent
- Done.
"Oilers' coach" add head coach
- Done.
"He survived the final roster cuts on September 7.[16] He made his NFL" Suggest merging these sentences to "roster cuts on September 7, and made his NFL debut"
- Done.
Anything else on his life after football?
- Added a little bit.
  - That first source said he lives in Longview. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 07:40, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - @WikiOriginal-9: Does my change work (Valentine returned to East Texas, where he grew up, after his football career ended and worked at a forging plant)? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I added an image

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:40, 21 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:38, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]