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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 13:58, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Pollosito (talk · contribs) 19:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Hi again, @Gained. I've been more engaged lately, but I'll review this article as soon as possible. In addition, I see that it is very easy to review, so it will save me work. I won't be as instantaneous as I was in my first three reviews (in fact, I have another article to review simultaneously), so I ask for your patience in the process. Thanks and best, Santi (talk) 19:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey again @Pollosito! Thanks for choosing this article to review and it's really nice to see you doing more GA reviews. I'm personally not going to be that busy for the rest of the month but take as much time as you need. Gained (talk) 05:23, 16 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, @Pollosito and @Gained. This is a courtesy ping to let you know I have redirected the article back to Eternal Sunshine (album). This article fails WP:NSONG; most of the sources used are from album reviews. Sincere apologies for this, as I recognize the well-done effort it took to write the page. ‍  PSA 🏕️  (talk) 13:08, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@PSA What a bummer; I thought the song was notable enough because it charted higher than most Eternal Sunshine tracks in Southeast Asia countries and is actually currently receiving more streams than most of the tracks including "Yes, And?". Gained (talk) 13:18, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
FWIW, keep in mind that chart performance is not a sure-fire guarantee for a song to have its article. ‍  PSA 🏕️  (talk) 13:26, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Pollosito Now that there's a deletion discussion for the article, I'd like to fail this GAN as it violates the "Stable" aspect of the GA criteria. Gained (talk) 14:47, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Gained: I agree. @PSA, thank you for the info given regarding the article. I hadn't realized this because I didn't have enough time to review it. It makes me sad that this article has the potential to be deleted for not having independent sources. So I'll close this review and it can be nominated again if it stays. Santi (talk) 16:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Gained (talk · contribs) 02:14, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing this soon. Glad that this got sorted out at AfD. Ippantekina (talk) 07:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Prose

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  • "After the release of her sixth studio album Positions (2020)" comma before album title
  • "The album's lead single "Yes, And?"" → lead single, "Yes, And?", ...
  • ""Intro (End of the World)" is reported to be the second song Grande wrote for Eternal Sunshine" reported by who?
  • "places emphasis on" emphasizes
  • "How can I tell if I'm in the right relationship?". remove the full stop after the quotation mark per MOS:"
  • singing the lyric "If it all ended tomorrow, would I be the one on your mind?". ditto
  • "The track was conceived as a companion to the song both in its sound and lyrics" which track/song are we talking about here...?

Sources

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  • Spotcheck: 1, 14, 21, 22, 33
    • 14: ""healing after a breakup"" should be "healing-from-a-breakup"
  • Include |url-access=limited in Rolling Stone refs

That's all I got! Ippantekina (talk) 07:37, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hey @Ippantekina! I have addressed your questions and done the rest. Gained (talk) 07:57, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Passing! :) Ippantekina (talk) 16:22, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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