Talk:Into the Unknown: Making Frozen 2/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:45, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Why is the "starring" part of the infobox purposely written to be empty?
• Improve the main image's non-free use rationale.
• "included" → "includes" (MOS:TENSE)
• "shortly after the platform's launch" – specify per WP:LEAD
• "Local crew" → "The local crew"
• "filming crew were" → "filming crew was" (American English)
• "dialogue and singing was" → "dialogue and singing were"
• Add a serial comma after "storyboards".
• "The cast come" → "The cast comes"
• Add a serial comma after "Josh Gad as Olaf".
• "lengthy hours" → "long hours"
• Add a serial comma between "Bobby, Kristen and Jennifer".
• "The crew discuss" → "The crew discusses"
• Add a serial comma between "Norway, Finland and Iceland".
• "Animation supervisor on Anna Hyun Min Lee" - reword

•  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a hyphen between "half finished".

•  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)

• "which approaches" → "that approaches"
• "decorated by" → "decorated with"
• "the crew arrive" → "the crew arrives"
• Add a serial comma between "Buck, Unten and Walters".
• "afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
• Sources are archived.
• Sort categories in alphabetical order.
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:44, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done Wingwatchers (talk) 18:59, 18 July 2021 (UTC)