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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 21:42, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I suspect this is going to ACR shortly, so I won't be scanning as thoroughly as I would for a normal GAN, so my review at ACR will be worth something. Neutral, broad, stable, images seem okay. --Rschen7754 21:49, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Disambig, external links good. --Rschen7754 21:59, 17 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All references are reliable. --Rschen7754 01:34, 18 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • and it runs -> and runs
  • southern Michigan farmland - why "Michigan"?
  • Lost a period on the last sentence of the first paragraph.
Lake Erie
  • I-75 bypasses to the southeast of Monroe - sounds awkward with the to.
Detroit
  • M-3 (Michigan highway) - borked link?
  • north northwesterly - hyphen?
  • UAW Freewa
Central Michigan
  • runs northerly - bad way to end a sentence.
Northern Michigan
  • northerly ending a clause
  • a pair of interchange
  • That sentence seems like it's trying to say two entirely different things.
  • merges in?
Upper Peninsula
  • northeasterly ending a sentence
  • two sentences starting with North of in a row
Indian trails
  • connected through seems awkward
  • comma after "the Cheboygan Trail"
Turnpikes and freeways

no issues

IH era
  • The International Bridge and its approaches opened. in Sault Ste. Marie. extra period
  • Note for the future: why was he jailed?
Freeway names
  • Checked.
Bridges
  • Second paragraph is a bit lengthy.
RJL
  • "accsess" on exit 72.
Auxiliary routes