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Reviewer: Rschen7754 (talk · contribs) 16:48, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]


To address the previous review, it was a 30-second sweep to catch self-published sources, so I don't think it prevents me from doing this review.
  • Sources 5 and 11 are deadlinks.
  • I can't tell what source 42 is.
  • The lead seems a bit slanted towards the history, when the RD is longer than the history.
  • In the first paragraph you overuse "the route".
  • In the second paragraph you overuse "portion".
Route description
  • "large interchange" - be more specific or cut it out entirely
  • "heads east-southeast industrial areas" - something missing
  • Later on, overuse of "development" and "interchange"
  • "As part of the Interstate Highway System, the entire length of I-295 is a part of the National Highway System." - perhaps this should go in an introduction to the RD, like Interstate 8 has it.
History
  • Please check to make sure that you don't start consecutive sentences with the same words.
Future
  • The northern portion of I-295 will be affected by the Pennsylvania Turnpike/Interstate 95 Interchange Project in Bristol Township, Pennsylvania. - I feel this sentence is bland and says almost nothing.

Should be a pass after this is resolved, but please go through and check for other overused words and extraneous details. --Rschen7754 18:20, 31 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, I have replied above. Dough4872 13:24, 1 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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