Talk:Interstate 195 (Maryland)/GA1
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 19:57, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
- I tried to rephrase the second sentence to make it easier to read. Please make sure I did not change the meaning in any way.
- You did not change the meeting, but it seemed a bit more awkward than it was, so I moved the Metropolitan Boulevard reference to the third sentence. VC 21:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
- The sentence starting with "Construction on the missing link..." doesn't make sense. Could you rephrase it?
- I left out the word "began." I inserted it in an appropriate spot in the sentence. VC 21:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
Otherwise looks good. Placing on hold until the one issue is fixed. Arsenikk (talk) 19:57, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review, Arsenikk. VC 21:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)
- Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 21:56, 9 October 2012 (UTC)