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Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 01:20, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Could you link "American Association of Industrial Editors" and "International Council of Industrial Editors"?
 Done though neither have articles, so they are red-links CorporateM (Talk) 01:27, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • late '80s to determine what made some PR department.... → 1980s and what is PR department?
 Done CorporateM (Talk) 01:33, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Oops. Must not have saved my edit. Now it's done. ;-) CorporateM (Talk) 12:10, 28 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • 7-9 percent → use ndash instead of hyphen.
 Done CorporateM (Talk) 01:29, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • About 8 percent of its members...→ eight.
 Done CorporateM (Talk) 01:30, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "IABC is no longer accepting new applicants for its Accredited Business Communicator (ABC) program, but a new certification program has been proposed that would require a computer test and renewals every three years." needs an inline ref.
 Done It was just two sentences that rely on the same cite. CorporateM (Talk) 01:36, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • "IABC publishes a code of ethics.[20] The code has three principles:..." → IABC publishes a code of ethics[20] which has three principles:.....?
 Done
  • Images need alt text.
 Done - although I just copy/pasted the caption as the alt text, since it seems to be the same. CorporateM (Talk) 01:37, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise looks good. I'll put it on hold. Zia Khan 01:22, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • "IABC hosts the Quill awards, which are bestowed at three levels: Gold Quill, Silver Quill and Bronze Quill." → IABC hosts the Quill awards, which are bestowed at three levels: Gold, Silver and Bronze.

 Done CorporateM (Talk) 02:37, 26 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I read the explanation for alt text, but still not sure what you mean. Can you explain? The source actually says PR department, which would be like the PR team. Not sure if this is better or not. CorporateM (Talk) 20:20, 2 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]