Talk:Interlacing in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
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2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
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3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
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5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Discussion

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Applying the medieval technique

The early reviewer William Blissett wrote in 1959 suggest mentioning that he reviewed it just four/five years after it was published.
- Done.
that the remark is witty but not really correct suggest that the remark is witty but not truly correct
- Done.

Depth and openendedness

what else was going on in Middle-earth at the same time suggest what else was occurred in Middle-earth at the same time
- Done.

Translation to film

how Jackson had done this suggest how Jackson achieved this
- Done.

@Chiswick Chap: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:36, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:02, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]