Talk:Indra Devi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass - AGF

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

See MOS:OVERLINK. I don't think India needs linked. Same with Argentina

Removed.

"believed to be the first Yoga" - This is the first time yoga is capitalized, the rest are lowercase. This should be consistent.

Fixed.

Link guru at first mention

Done.

Sari is a duplink

Fixed.

"St Petersburg" - Should there be a period after "St"?

Saint it is.

2.

See WP:RSP. Find a Grave is not a reliable source.

Removed.

"yoga teachers.[9][6][14]" - Some editors are very particular that refs should be in numerical order, it's probably best to have them in numerical order so no complaints are caused

Done.

"respected mother".[17][9]" - Ref order

Done.

"Devi recorded several instructional talks on yoga in the 1970s, including "Renew Your Life with Yoga."[35]" - The ref provided does not seem to include the 1970s anywhere.

Said 'later' instead.

Do we have ISBNs for her first three works, or just OCLCs?

OCLC is all that's available for those early days.

Ref 5 needs the author and an accessdate

Added.

Ref 7 needs an accessdate

Added.

Ref 10 needs an accessdate

Added.

The page ranges in the references should have endashes, not the short dashes

Done. This definitely comes under the category of "life's too short to stuff mushrooms".

Ref 17 needs the author

Added.

Ref 22 needs the accessdate

Added.

The sources should be in alphabetical order

Sorted, in both senses.

Looks like there's a weird markup error in one of the sources, not entirely sure where the error is though.

Fixed.

3.

Date of birth isn't in the main prose.

Added.

The sections about India and China aren't summarized in the lead

Added.

4.

5.

6.

AGF on the album cover image. Can't verify if it was published without a copyright notice or not, but I'll assume good faith that the file tagging is accurate.

Noted.

7.

@Chiswick Chap: - Ref 37's to Find a Grave yet. It looks like it may not be necessary. That looks like all that's left before this'll pass. Hog Farm (talk) 14:42, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Removed. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:44, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]