Talk:Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics

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Review: May 28, 2018. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 12 June 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the first ever Indonesian Olympic team included a high jump athlete who later became a lieutenant colonel?

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:52, 27 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll give this one a look-over momentarily. Courcelles (talk) 20:52, 27 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Weblink in infobox doesn't work.

Removed. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Eventually, the team did not win any medal." -> "The team did not win any medals."

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"1945—1949)" en, not emdashes for date ranges.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"In 1951 Indonesia competed in the first Asian Games in 1951" Unless there were actually two Asian Games in 1951, one of those 1951's in the sentence needs to go.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Don't assume everyone knows what the IOC is. Even on an article like this.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The results would look better as tables under each event's description, see most other X at the yyyy Olympics GA's of late.

Done. Thanks for the suggestion. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink Weightlifting at the 1952 Summer Olympics somewhere.

Done (in table). HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"he ran a time" Swam a time, perhaps?

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No need to capitalise Heat Five.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

".[8][9][4]" Citations go in numerical order

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

". His best completed lifts from each variants" No need for the s on variant.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The last three EL's seem to duplicate content from the various Sports Reference pages you've actually cited. Could lose them.

Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Images look fine, article is stable.

Courcelles (talk) 21:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Thanks for your review. I've updated the article, please take a look at my responses above. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Will promote when I get home and off my phone. Courcelles (talk) 16:55, 28 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]