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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 19:34, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi

Thank you for reviewing this page and giving suggestions. I have edited this page according to the suggestions you gave me and I have given my opinions in were it could not be done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:28, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

Lede

also known as Team India or the Men in Blue,[10] - that reference doesn't make that claim. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:59, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I have added a reference

Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:08, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
No need to link India. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:59, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think India should be linked , cricket is also a influential in india and vice versa Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:14, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's not really the point, we don't link major landmasses. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:06, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:36, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
India had to wait until 1952, almost twenty years, for its first Test victory - this should probably say against whom Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:59, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:31, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Watch out for duplicate links in the lede. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:59, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:37, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Ledes should be max four paragraphs. No reason to have two tiny ones placed at the end. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:59, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:44, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General

quadrangular tournament - this isn't really a thing. Can just say tournament. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Actually the name of the tournament is Bombay quadrangular Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:51, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:51, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
to The Imperial Cricket - no caps on "The", see WP:THE. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 06:53, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
was not strong in their batting at - unless this is someone's opinion, we shouldn't be stating it. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done added reference Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:01, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
played 2 Tests - two, see MOS:NUM. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:04, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Australia won the five-match series 4–0 - a non-initiated person might be confused as to how this happened. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
In the next part of the sentence it is stated that it is due the good batting of Australian's like Bradman Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:06, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:07, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That's not what I mean - a non-initiated user wouldn't know you could draw matches and it not be counted. How does a five match series finish at 4-0? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:07, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:32, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
5-Test - MOS:NUM again, check throughout. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:12, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
a big part in their one Test win.[29][30][31][32] - WP:CITEKILL. Three is generally considered all that's required. If you need to state more, see WP:BUNDLING Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:29, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
US$612,000,000 - no need to state "US", we expect the usage of the American dollar. See MOS:CURRENCY. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:30, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
[71] The current - need to come up with a better way to source that table than have a cite open a sentence. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:38, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
[74] Previously - same. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:38, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Star India and Airtel have been title sponsors previously.[88][89]

Star Sports Network is the official broadcaster until 2023 for all matches the team plays in India.[90] - can we merge this stuff? These are tiny paras. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That list of stadiums could almost be it's own article, rather than a large table in a long article. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:31, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thirty-five men - never start a sentence with a number, even if the number is spelled out. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:01, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The flags in the table for current squad completely fair MOS:ICON. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:05, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This still fails MOS:FLAG with the last ODI having flags instead of text. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:54, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The "pay grade section" is both uncited and unencylopedic. I'd remove. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think it should not be removed as it is a important part of function of the team Done I have also added citations Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:16, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The coaching section has no prose, which seems to be required. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:25, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Where are the recent results cited too? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:55, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Icon issues in the tournament history section.Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Things like the "ODI record versus other nations" and similar items seem like WP:TRIVIA and specifically WP:STATCRUFT. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think that should be part of the article unlike other sports cricket values playing between nations more than clib matches Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:09, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:10, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
It's not "done" if you make no effort to remove it. I don't see how these are anything other than WP:CRUFT. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:13, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
For knowing whether a team is strong you need to know Head-to-Head record . You can also see these in page like Argentina,Brazil etc Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:33, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
That doesn't make it encyclopedic information. We write articles about subjects, not to prove how "strong" they are. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:29, 29 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Note a seems like Trivia, as well as uncited. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:25, 11 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done I have integrated it Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:25, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think the broadcasting and sponsorship shouldn't be together Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:43, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think the broadcasting and sponsorship shouldn't be together Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:44, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

some glitch has made my reply to be here for the question you asked about merging two small paragraph Xakimoy546 (talk) 07:46, 20 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Why does the current squad etc have a really ugly blue header? Just retain the original. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done retained orginal Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:11, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The current sponsor of the team is BYJU's... Previously, the India - why do these sentences start with a citation? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I corrected it

Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:07, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Players also receive a match fee of ₹15 lakh (US$19,000) per Test match, ₹6 lakh (US$7,500) per ODI, and ₹3 lakh (US$3,800) per T20I. - uncited. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
citation added

Done

Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:14, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Can we not have some prose to accompany the coaching staff section? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done added prose Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:41, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The cricket world cup section's flags completely break MOS:FLAG.Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Can we get some prose for the tournament history? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done added to major tournaments section Xakimoy546 (talk) 14:57, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Where are the honours sourced too? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:12, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Done Xakimoy546 (talk) 08:01, 25 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:34, 27 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Xakimoy546 and Lee Vilenski, what is the status of this review? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:33, 9 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- I am going to fail this nomination as abandoned, with no prejudice for it being re-nominated at a later date. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:32, 12 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]