Talk:Inaruwa Municipality/GA1
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 13:10, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
I'm failing this nomination for several immediate reasons.
- The layout of the article makes it unreadable. The infobox is so long, and there is so little text at the top of the article, that several page-downs are needed before any of the article is visible.
- The image sizes in the article are far too large, making them larger than a screen size.
- There is unsourced material in the article.
- The article has empty sections.
- The prose needs a great deal of work. Examples: "According to latest data as published by Inaruwa municipality, 27 public schools with highly appreciated technology like E-attendance and Wi-fi." and "Inaruwa has numerous local newspaper publications , Radio stations as well as provided by all national newspapers, televisios . Daily newspapers like Pratikchhan daily , Radio stations like Popular FM , Advance FM , National daily newspapers like The Kathmandu post, The Himalayan Times , The Annapurna post , all TV channels like kantipur television , Galaxy News , Prime News etc. Provide services . Also , few of them provide e- News services via Facebook, Twitter."
I would suggest seeking the advice of another editor familiar with GA standards before renominating. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:10, 15 April 2023 (UTC)