Talk:In the Spirit of Crazy Horse
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[edit]I've made needed changes to break up run-on sentences, add needed punctuation, and restore some balance to the Lead. The book was more than the libel suits it attracted. Moved more of the suits material down into the main body of the text. Content on the book itself and its critical reception needs to be expanded. In addition, the book has been subject to re-evaluation in the last decade or so, and that perspective needs to be included. Made more editing changes to add authors' names to newspaper articles, and use correct formatting for cites.Parkwells (talk) 13:17, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
- Moved Newsweek suit to body of text - the Lead should concentrate on the book.Parkwells (talk) 13:35, 29 June 2011 (UTC)