Talk:In the Aeroplane Over the Sea/GA1
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Reviewer: DMT biscuit (talk · contribs) 09:40, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]Remove the mention of distortion in the second paragraph, it's too technical for a lead and doesn't properly summarize the album.
Recording
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Compostion
[edit]"Despite the wide variety of music and instruments"-remove this
@DMT biscuit: Alright, I've addressed your issues. Famous Hobo (talk) 15:58, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
This article is now sufficient and will be passed due to it being compressive, well written and detailed :)DMT biscuit (talk) 23:44, 9 April 2020 (UTC)