Talk:Imperial Japanese Army during the Pacific War/GA1
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Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 01:34, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
After reading this article, it's hard to see how it's sufficiently broad to meet good article status. A lot of aspects, such as conscription (did soldiers enlist more or less voluntarily or did they have to be dragged in chains to the battlefield?), training, ideology, tactics, how the army interacted with society, are not dealt with in much depth. A comparable article on the Wehrmacht is more than three times longer than this one. PS "disease" is mentioned in the lead and not the body; in a good article, anything mentioned in the lead should be elaborated in the body. (t · c) buidhe 01:34, 5 March 2021 (UTC)