Talk:Ike Turner/GA1
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 01:21, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 01:21, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
Lede
[edit]- Lede is little long and the second paragraph is a bit bloated. This sentence might be dropped:
Turner recorded for many of the key R&B record labels of the 1950s and 1960s, including Chess, Modern, Trumpet, Flair, and Sue.[6] He progressed to larger labels such as Blue Thumb, Liberty, and United Artists with the Ike & Tina Turner Revue.
MOS:LEAD refers. - Reference 2 requires subscription.
- Reference 3 requires subscription.
- Reference 5 is a link to an online book with 492 pages. We need a page number to go to in the link.
- Reference 8 requires subscription
Early Life
[edit]- Reference 20 requires registration
- Birthplace image: is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported
- Reference 23 requires subscription... See Reference 155
- Reference 24 is a 304 page online book. We need a page reference to the matter referenced.
- Reference 24 (second citation) needs a page reference.
- Reference 25 requires subscription to read it.
- Reference 30 goes to The Times, not the article in The Times.
Career
[edit]1946–1950: Formation of the Kings of Rhythm
[edit]- Precis of main article on Kings of Rhythm.
1951: "Rocket 88"
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- Sun records image is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution 2.0 Generic
1951–1954: Session musician and talent scout
[edit]- Reference 24 in paragraph 1 is a 304 page online book. We need a page reference to the matter referenced in this paragraph.
- Reference 24 at the end of paragraph 2 is a 304 page online book. We need a page reference to the matter referenced in this paragraph.
- Reference 57 requires subscription.
1954–1959: St. Louis
[edit]- Reference 24 in paragraph 1 is a 304 page online book. We need a page reference to the matter referenced in this paragraph.
- Reference 67 needs a page reference;
1960–1976: The Ike and Tina Turner Revue
[edit]- Hamburg performance image is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 Generic;
- Reference 83 requires registration
- Amsterdam Airport image is made available under the Creative Commons CC0 1.0 Universal Public Domain Dedication
- Reference 88 is a dead link
- section is a good summary of their rising success and pithy precis of Tina walking out. Comprehensive coverage for 16 years.
1977–2007: Later solo career
[edit]- Reference 95 requires subscription
- Reference 96 does not go to the relevant page.
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Artistry and Legacy
[edit]Musical Style
[edit]- Image Turner performing in 1972 is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported
- First paragraph is an excellent summary of Turner's early career.
- Excellent summary of what Ike could do with a Fender Stratocaster considering he preferred piano. Well scribed.
Influence
[edit]- Strong section
Accolades
[edit]- Appropriate
Portrayal in Popular Culture
[edit]- Reference 146 is a dead link
- Reference 151 requires registration
Books
[edit]- Noted
Material Loss
[edit]- Noted
Personal Life
[edit]Marriages
[edit]Early Marriages
[edit]- This section works well as a summary
Later marriages
[edit]- Consider consolidating a new section called Later marriages and include summary of each of Ann Thomas, Jeanette Turner and Audrey Turner.
Children
[edit]- Reference 176 requires registration
- musical achievements of the children noted.
Legal difficulties and drug addiction
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- Reference 193 requires subscription
- Reference 194 requires registration
- Reference 196 is a dead link. Find it on the Wayback Machine
Religious Affiliation
[edit]- Noted
Death
[edit]- Noted
Awards and Nominations
[edit]- Noted
Blues Foundation Awards
[edit]- Noted
Selected discography
[edit]- Noted
Studio albums
[edit]- Noted
Live albums
[edit]- Noted
Compilations
[edit]- Noted
Recordings as a sideman
[edit]- Noted
Ike and Tina Turner
[edit]- Noted
References
[edit]- References follow MOS. However, many are not up to date and require either subscription or registration.
Sources
[edit]- Noted
External Links
[edit]- Noted
Final
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- While this is a robust article about Ike Turner and is well referenced, it is an old article, and the links should have been updated prior to nominating for Good Article status.
- There are several suggestions for consideration.
Conclusion
[edit]- GA on hold --Whiteguru (talk) 08:59, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
- I've made changes to correct the issues that were addressed in the GA Review.--Twixister (talk) 05:05, 3 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Twixister: Changes made so far look good. Thank you. The GA Review cannot be passed until the citation issues are repaired. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:29, 3 March 2021 (UTC)
- I added page numbers to the books and removed the dead links. Some of the citations from sources like The New York Times require a registration. What are the citation issues that need to be repaired?--Twixister (talk) 12:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Twixister: Where The New York Times requires registration, simply add the template {{subscription required}} or {{registration required}} to the entry - as the case may be - (as cited above) and this shall likely fix all your issues. --Whiteguru (talk) 02:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for explaining. I've added the subscription required template to the citations--Twixister (talk) 12:54, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for your work. You have done a lot of checking on archive.org which has brought the results you need. That finishes the review for you --Whiteguru (talk) 03:49, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you for explaining. I've added the subscription required template to the citations--Twixister (talk) 12:54, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Twixister: Where The New York Times requires registration, simply add the template {{subscription required}} or {{registration required}} to the entry - as the case may be - (as cited above) and this shall likely fix all your issues. --Whiteguru (talk) 02:15, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
- I added page numbers to the books and removed the dead links. Some of the citations from sources like The New York Times require a registration. What are the citation issues that need to be repaired?--Twixister (talk) 12:38, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Twixister: Changes made so far look good. Thank you. The GA Review cannot be passed until the citation issues are repaired. --Whiteguru (talk) 20:29, 3 March 2021 (UTC)