Talk:If Anything Happens I Love You/GA1
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 06:41, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
I just recently watched this on Netflix and boy was I impressed. Didn't cry, but impressed. Will review this article. GeraldWL 06:41, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Images need alt text.
Done
- PLot's kinda repetitive. I've edited it, see if you have any problems with it.
- Thanks!
- "who used TVPaint to animate the film." 'TVPaint Animation' is the right term, TVPaint is a nickname.
- Done
- "the film was edited by Peter Ettinger on Adobe Premiere." Since the film is a new production, there's no way it's edited in the former Adobe Premiere; should be Adobe Premiere Pro. So suggest changing that.
- Done
- "the film holds an approval rating of 100%"-- suggest linking List of films with a 100% rating on Rotten Tomatoes.
- Done
- @Gerald Waldo Luis: All of your suggestions have been addressed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, as you've probably seen, I added more content from the first Prod paragraph. I believe there's more to be said via the sources, let me know if you can. If otherwise, I'll just pass this anyway. GeraldWL 10:19, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Gerald Waldo Luis: I think that overall, the article covers most of what the sources state. All I believe we could add would be quotes, but even without them this page summarizes those sources quite well. That being said, I don't think I can truly "expand" the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 10:39, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, aight, passing it now then. GeraldWL 10:47, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Gerald Waldo Luis: I think that overall, the article covers most of what the sources state. All I believe we could add would be quotes, but even without them this page summarizes those sources quite well. That being said, I don't think I can truly "expand" the article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 10:39, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
- Some Dude From North Carolina, as you've probably seen, I added more content from the first Prod paragraph. I believe there's more to be said via the sources, let me know if you can. If otherwise, I'll just pass this anyway. GeraldWL 10:19, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.