Talk:Iceland at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:26, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:26, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• "Before Sochi, they had only participated in two Winter Paralympic Games, the 1994 and 2010 editions. Sochi was therefore their third appearance at a Winter Paralympics." Merge these two sentences.
  • Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:33, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
• "classified as an LW12-1" What's the "-1" for?
  • Um, actually, no clue. None of the sources mention breaking down LW12 either. Courcelles (talk) 05:33, 13 August 2018 (UTC)
• Try using "Jóhann" instead of "he" multiple times.
  • Done.

That's it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:29, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

• thanks for the review, replies inline. Courcelles (talk) 05:33, 13 August 2018 (UTC)