Talk:Ice (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: Pedro J. the rookie 15:02, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
The artical is okay but it needs some development in parts.
- The lead doesn't metion the recption or much of the inspiration of the episode. That needs to be improved.
- Can you add valid refrences about the guest stars in the episode.
- Add Alt to the image.
Thats my issues with this article. Pedro J. the rookie 15:02, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the article. I can do points 1 and 3 right now, but would you like the cast referenced in the infobox or in a new paragraph of prose? I have a book on hand with the cast listed so the citation's not a problem, just wondering where you think it should go. GRAPPLE X 15:11, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I would prefer you to put it in a new paragraph. Pedro J. the rookie 16:06, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- It seemed a bit too little for a whole paragraph so I put it into the paragraph about it being a bottle episode, here. GRAPPLE X 16:27, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- Alright pass. Pedro J. the rookie 16:44, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- It seemed a bit too little for a whole paragraph so I put it into the paragraph about it being a bottle episode, here. GRAPPLE X 16:27, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
- I would prefer you to put it in a new paragraph. Pedro J. the rookie 16:06, 9 August 2011 (UTC)