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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "best-known and best-loved songs" → This seems like an exceptional claim and isn't mentioned in the body.
    • Reworded.
  • "based on a real event" → This is also not mentioned in the body.
    • Added.
  • Link epistle.
  • "Swedish song tradition" → Maybe just write "Swedish ballad tradition", as ballad and song aren't exact synonyms.
    • Done.
  • "influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"?
  • Link epistle.
    • See above.
  • Link pastorales.
    • Done.
  • "post-baroque" → Shouldn't Baroque be capitalized? Also link.
    • Done.
  • Link burlesque.
    • Done.
  • Link timbres.
    • The link is something else; I've added a gloss.
  • "Gamla stan" → Since this is a proper noun, is the italicization necessary?
    • Removed.
  • Is "(song starts at 23:00)" needed in the external link, since it's a recording?
    • It'll certainly help readers as the place in the concert isn't at all obvious.
  • All the references seem reliable and are properly formatted, although as they are all books/in Swedish, I can not verify them. AryKun (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Just a sorta note: The article about the lady Ulla was based on states that she was arrested for wearing silk, so that might need to be checked out. AryKun (talk) 10:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]