Talk:I Wanna Go/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 12 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

**Please put a Done next to every point you have amended, or put a Not done next to ones you have not done, with a reason.**

Info Box

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What year was the song recorded? Done
Use {{Duration|m=3|s=30}} for the length parameter Done

Lead

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seventh studio album, Femme Fatale. → Put (2011) after Femme Fatale. Done
Spears first posted a snippet of the track in February 2011, prior to the album's release. → Posted a snippet where? Done
Following a poll on her official website in which fans could choose the third single of the album, "I Wanna Go" was announced as a single on May 13, 2011. → So this won the poll then? Done
reminiscent of New Order → Who or what is New Order? Done
Spears' vocals are processed, and she squeals and stutters throughout the song. → Is this mean't to be here?! Done
, and another one by → and another by Done
the lower regions → the lower end Done
Marrs Piliero explained → Piliero described Done
at the → on the Done

Background and artwork

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With Rolling Stone, → In an interview with Rolling Stone, Done
on the music video set → on set of the music video Done

Composition

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English band New Order, more specifically of their single "Blue Monday" (1983). → English band New Order's song "Blue Monday" (1983). Done
pre-chorus → verse? Done Wiki-link added.
No need to two paragraphs really. Done
low-key → low note, and no need to hypenate high note. Not done Till the World Ends is in the same style and the text is the same since it was reviewed.
WP:OTHERSTUFF. Key is what the song is written in. Note is the note in which a singer hits. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:56, 23 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 00:12, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Remixes

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"I Wanna Go" was remixed with guest vocals by Indian singer Sonu Nigam and released on the DesiHits website in June 2011. In the remix, Sonu mirrors Spears' vocals in Hindi over Indian instruments. Spears said about the song, "I'm so excited about having Sonu on I Wanna Go. His vocals add such a different feel, which I love! Watch out Bollywood – it's Britney and Sonu!". → Is this all supported by that one source? Done Sources added.
Move this section to below the Live performances section. Not done Same style as Till the World Ends and Me Against the Music
WP:OTHERSTUFF. It doesn't look right. Move it down. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:57, 23 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 00:12, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

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Lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some? Then I will go through this section. Done
Is the first parapgraph reviews for before the song was released? As the second says "After the release of Femme Fatale".

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:27, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

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Double digit numbers should be written as numerals. Not done Lots of articles are exactly like this: ...Baby One More Time, From the Bottom of My Broken Heart, Piece of Me, Circus (song), If U Seek Amy, Womanizer (song) and many more...
WP:OTHERSTUFF. They are wrong. MOS clearly states here that double digits are to written numerically. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 22:59, 23 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 00:12, 24 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
On the week of → On the chart issue (Do this for all counts) Done
Should be Beyonce Knowles, not Beyonce the first time. Done
Knowles, not simply Beyonce. Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine → where??? Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine, making Femme Fatale the first album by Spears to achieve three top ten singles. → Source? Done
The song peaked atop the Pop Songs chart on September 24, 2011, becoming Spears' sixth single to top the chart, and setting a record for the longest span of number-one singles by an artist (12 years, seven months and four days). →Source? Done
Spears scored her first chart-topper with "...Baby One More Time" on the week of February 20, 1999. She also tied Mariah Carey and Beyoncé for the third-highest female total of number-one singles. → Source? Done
chart-topper → number one single on the chart Done
In Australia, "I Wanna Go" debuted at number thirty-three on the ARIA Singles Chart on the week of July 10, 2011. It peaked at number thirty-one three weeks later, on July 31, 2011. The song became the third lowest peaking single of Spears' career in the country, after "Radar" (2009) at forty-six and "From the Bottom of My Broken Heart" (1999) at thirty-seven. → Sources? Done
In New Zealand, the song debuted at number twenty-five on the official chart → The song debuted at number 25 on the New Zealand Singles Chart Done
and peaked at number twenty-two the following week. → Source? Done
Where did it peak in Ireland? You only list the debut. Done

Music video (Development)

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Spears first contacted Marrs Piliero and asked him to put together a concept for the video. → Source?

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:35, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

He watched all of Spears' videos and wanted to pull what he loved from them, but also give it something fresh. → Who is "he"? Who are you referring to here?

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:35, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Piliero had the concept nearly finished by the time he met with Spears. → Do you know of a time period for this?

No. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:35, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Piliero had the concept nearly finished by the time he met with Spears.[45] Both wanted to explore fun ways for her to be inappropriate in the video.[44] Spears suggested different alternatives, including having the cop frisk her.[45] → These three sentences read awkwardly, they don't really flow from one to the next.

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:35, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

He also stated that the Crossroads (2002) reference "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. → Source?
Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it."[44] → Have you forgotten to open the quote here? I don't understand what is happening here.

The quote includes those two sentences. - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 16:35, 30 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The quote includes those TWO SENTENCES: "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it.". - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 12:31, 7 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Music video (Synopsis)

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No issues. I did a c/e of the section, as it was easier than telling you what to change.

Music video (Release and reception)

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On June 17, 2011, Jive Records announced through a press release that an exclusive 30-second teaser would premiere on June 19, 2011, on Bravo's Watch What Happens: Live and on Vevo simultaneously. → Source?

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 03:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The official video was revealed → The full length video was revealed

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 03:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances

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"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." Spears and her dancers bring fans onstage and dance with them throughout the performance. → Sources?

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 03:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. → Though the song has never been performed live as part of a televised performance, "I Wanna Go" was featured on the set list of the Femme Fatale Tour (2011).

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 03:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." → Unless you can provide a reason as to why this is relevant, it should be removed.

Removed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 03:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Track listings

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No issues.

Credits and personnel

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No issues.

Charts

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Both sets of tables need to conform with WP:ACCESS. See here to see how it is done.

Done - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 12:35, 7 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not done Aaron • ^{You Da One} 00:56, 29 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have done this. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:43, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Radio date and release history

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Same as the charts tables, needs to conform with WP:ACCESS. See here to see how it is done.

It looks like the same thing to me... :( - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 12:37, 7 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I have done it. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:43, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All the Footnotes should be next to the Country, so for Brazil and the UK, the footnotes should be next to the country like the others.

Fixed - Saulo ^{Talk to Me} 12:37, 7 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

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Reference wide note: Entire words should not be written in capitals in the title parameter.
Reference wide note: MTV's publisher is Viacom. Same for VH1.
Billboard sources use the {{cite news}} template.
FN2: Link Hachette Filipacchi (UK) Ltd.
FN6: Britney.com is not reliable. We don't use singer's websites as they are self published.
FN7: Same as FN6
FN8: Same as FN6/7
FN13: Publisher?
FN29: Access date?
FN49: Unlink MTV as it is over linked, and why is it in italics?
FN60: Link [[Idolator (website)|Idolator]] and [[Buzz Media]]
FN67: Access date?
FN81: Access date?
I sorted out all of these. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:53, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Passing, but a closing note.

This GAN has gone on for two months. You really should try and solve issues yourself when asked multiple times! This could have been passed weeks and weeks ago. I have corrected outstanding issues and the article is passed. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:55, 8 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]