Talk:I Wanna Go/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 18:15, 3 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Info Box

What year was the song recorded?
Use {{Duration|m=3|s=30}} for the length parameter

Lead

seventh studio album, Femme Fatale. → Put (2011) after Femme Fatale.
Spears first posted a snippet of the track in February 2011, prior to the album's release. → Posted a snippet where?
Following a poll on her official website in which fans could choose the third single of the album, "I Wanna Go" was announced as a single on May 13, 2011. → So this won the poll then?
reminiscent of New Order → Who or what is New Order?
Spears' vocals are processed, and she squeals and stutters throughout the song. → Is this mean't to be here?!
, and another one by → and another by
the lower regions → the lower end
Marrs Piliero explained → Piliero described
at the → on the

Background and artwork

With Rolling Stone, → In an interview with Rolling Stone,
on the music video set → on set of the music video

Composition

English band New Order, more specifically of their single "Blue Monday" (1983). → English band New Order's song "Blue Monday" (1983).
pre-chorus → verse?
No need to two paragraphs really.
low-key → low note, and no need to hypenate high note.

Remixes

"I Wanna Go" was remixed with guest vocals by Indian singer Sonu Nigam and released on the DesiHits website in June 2011. In the remix, Sonu mirrors Spears' vocals in Hindi over Indian instruments. Spears said about the song, "I'm so excited about having Sonu on I Wanna Go. His vocals add such a different feel, which I love! Watch out Bollywood – it's Britney and Sonu!". → Is this all supported by that one source?
Move this section to below the Live performances section.

Critical reception

Lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some? Then I will go through this section.

Chart performance

Double digit numbers should be written as numerals.
On the week of → On the chart issue (Do this for all counts)
Should be Beyonce Knowles, not Beyonce the first time.
Knowles, not simply Beyonce.
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine → where???
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine, making Femme Fatale the first album by Spears to achieve three top ten singles. → Source?
The song peaked atop the Pop Songs chart on September 24, 2011, becoming Spears' sixth single to top the chart, and setting a record for the longest span of number-one singles by an artist (12 years, seven months and four days). →Source?
Spears scored her first chart-topper with "...Baby One More Time" on the week of February 20, 1999. She also tied Mariah Carey and Beyoncé for the third-highest female total of number-one singles. → Source?
chart-topper → number one single on the chart
In Australia, "I Wanna Go" debuted at number thirty-three on the ARIA Singles Chart on the week of July 10, 2011. It peaked at number thirty-one three weeks later, on July 31, 2011. The song became the third lowest peaking single of Spears' career in the country, after "Radar" (2009) at forty-six and "From the Bottom of My Broken Heart" (1999) at thirty-seven. → Sources?
In New Zealand, the song debuted at number twenty-five on the official chart → The song debuted at number 25 on the New Zealand Singles Chart
and peaked at number twenty-two the following week. → Source?
Where did u peaked in Ireland? You only list the debut.

Summary

No conscious effort has been made over the past week to address these issues. I'm sorry, but I am not going to continue reviewing if not even these points can be addressed, so I am failing. Calvin • ^{Watch n' Learn} 00:11, 12 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]