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"is a song recorded by Romanian" → "is a song by Romanian"
"digitally released by" → "digitally released through" as there is currently two many close uses of "by"
"while production was handled" → "while the production was handled"
"track, "I Think I Love It" lyrically discusses" → "track, the song's lyrics discuss"
Remove sentence about praise as it's literally only one critic
"An accompanying music video..." start a new para at this sentence
"directed by Criss Blaziny in Constanța." → "directed by Criss Blaziny." as the location is not notable enough for lead
"Making use of several explicit imagery" this reads awkwardly due to no plural, reword
Done everything apart from the new para suggestion. Paragraphs look really ugly if they're only two or three-line, and that's the case here. I thin it's alright the way it is now.
Add a sentence about the chart performance after the one about release
This doesn't really fit in here. I think for such articles with really short length, it's alright to only mention one single peak in the lead and in its own "Charts" section.
"Alexandra Stan had previously" → "Prior to release, Stan had" as you should only use her full name in the lead and remove WikiLink
""I Think I Love It" served as" → "The song served as"
"another large board patterned with bananas and LED border lights in the clip's" → "another large board, patterned with bananas and LED border lights, in the clip's"
"Closing the video are" → "The video closes out with"
"and noted" → "while he also noted"
"Stan also posted" is the word also really needed as it doesn't say that someone else posted first?
""impress[ed] to no end, [...] giving..." → ""impress[ed] to no end", describing her as "giving..."
"the singer sang for" → "the singer sang the song for"
"Stan has further appeared" → "Stan made further appearances"
Done everything apart from the new para suggestion. Paragraphs look really ugly if they're only two or three-line, and that's the case here. I thin it's alright the way it is now.
On hold for now. Good job on this, just a number of fixes and you're done!
Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:15, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
