Talk:I Miss You (Beyoncé song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk) 20:47, 23 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

"Format: Digital download". Wasn't the song also released on the physical CD? Plus, songs that are not promotional or official singles don't need a format on their infobox. Examples: Mmm Papi, Shattered Glass, both are good articles.
Comment by Calvin999 - No, because it wasn't/hasn't been released officially. It is just a song from 4 which garnered a lot of attention and also charted on the strength of downloads alone when 4 was released. Calvin • ^NaNaNaC'mon! 22:58, 23 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Missing the year of song recording on "Recorded". Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Producers names need to be in full, even if they were already cited on the "Writer" section. Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development

It would be good to archive this URL: http://www.beyonceonline.com/us/countdown . We don't know if this page will be active for a long time.

Unfortunately, it has not yet been archieved. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've archived the URL myself: http://www.webcitation.org/61AricK0I - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:52, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Ohhh thank you very much. Jivesh • Talk2Me 09:56, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Composition

"Matthew Perpetua of The Rolling Stone" -> "Matthew Perpetua of Rolling Stone". Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Sample must be reduced to 17 seconds, per WP:SAMPLE. Exceptions can not be made. For each 10 seconds add a 1 second to the sample. So, for 2:59, it is 15+1+1=17 seconds.

My friend will do it. Can't it be 18 seconds? 10% of the length is 17.9 and to two significant figures, it equals to 18 seconds. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I guess it could... I mean, it's just one second, right? - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:52, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. My friend will do it but he is not online. I do not know how to fix that. Jivesh • Talk2Me 09:56, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 16:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

Chart tables must be in a separate section, while the chart performance text, since it is really small, should be with the Critical reception in a section titled "Reception". Examples: Boys, Dangerously in Love 2, Radio, And Then We Kiss, I've Just Begun (Having My Fun). Done Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:01, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have done it although i strongly believe that all the articles you cited as examples have a considerably small critical reception section. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:12, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What i did initially, could have remained. For instance see, Kitty Kat (song) and nothing about that was mentioned on its review page. I did a stand alone Reception section for "Dangerously in Love 2" only because the critical response was not as huge as it it is for "I Miss You". Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I changed it back after much thought. It will be much easier for a reader to understand it this way (i mean when they are separate and especially its chart performance being just above the charts) in my opinion. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:21, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Just visited Kitty Kat (song), and I get your point of view. Ok, then. :)

The rest is great. I can not believe in how amazing this article is. Congrats! :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 21:15, 23 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

My sincere thanks to you. I advise you to listen to the song which is equally great. I am sure you will like it (because it is far from what Britney sings nowadays) but still give it a try. Jivesh • Talk2Me 07:18, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! Also, I have the deluxe edition of 4 and all of previous Beyoncé CD's! I'm a huge fan of her and the Destiny's Child, but I'm also a Britney fan. They have completly different styles, that is why I love both so damn much. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 09:52, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is indeed rare to see. Lol. I also like Bit-Brit. "I Wanna Go" is just too good. Jivesh • Talk2Me 09:56, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will be out for the next 7 hours. I will respond later to anything you post. Jivesh • Talk2Me 09:59, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Would you like to join her Wiki-project? I mean you are an amazing editor. We will be lucky to have you on board. Jivesh • Talk2Me 16:16, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to join! Also, this article has passed. :) Congrats! - Sauloviegas (talk) 21:06, 24 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. You are a very nice reviewer. Kind and patient. This has become something rare over here. Lol. See you. Jivesh • Talk2Me 05:49, 25 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]