Talk:I Don't Wanna Be in Love (Keyshia Cole song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

You have two articles pending, therefore it is only right that I take one on! --K. Peake 06:37, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Remove ref from the infobox since the genre is sourced in the body
Make the writing/production sentence the second of the lead instead
Remove independent record label introduction because that being solely in the body is sufficient
"during Cole and Ashanti's appearances" → "during her and Ashanti's joint appearance" to stop it from sounding like they appeared separately
"Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Ron Fair."
"A brokenhearted ballad, its lyrics revolve" → "A R&B ballad, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" revolves" with the pipes
"by music critics who complimented its lyrics and instrumental." → "by music critics, who complimented its lyrics and instrumentation." with the pipe
"on the US R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay," → "on the Billboard R&B/Hip-Hop Airplay chart," with the pipe
"number eleven on the" → "number 11 on the" per MOS:NUM
Add a sentence mentioning the audio visualizer after the above one

Background and release

"almost three years after the release of her seventh studio album," → "around three years after the release of her seventh studio album"
"on her eighth studio album." → "on her eighth album." to avoid overusage of studio album
"The song was played as part of the" → "The song was debuted during the"
"on January 21, 2020." → "on January 21, 2021."
"along with the release date as" → "along with the release date of"
"and black sneakers along with" → "and black sneakers, along with"
"in the corner of the cover hanging above her symbolizing" → "in the corner dangling above her, symbolizing" to avoid overusage of hang terms
"The song was the first release under" → "The song was released for digital download and streaming as the first single under" with the pipes, also add the ref for various releases here
Pipe urban contemporary to Urban contemporary music

Composition and lyrics

""I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is" → "Musically, "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" is"
Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
Also mention the piano, bass and synths under instrumentation per Soul Bounce
Mention the ad-libs and high notes from Cole per Hip Hop Weekly in a sentence after the above one
"written by Cole herself and Brian Bates with production" → "written by Cole and Brian Bates, with production"
"Greg Edwards and Ron Fair." → "Greg Edwards, and Fair." plus cite the Tidal credits instead of [12][19] here
"The song is about Cole" → "It is about Cole"
"a friends with benefits relationship with" → "a friends with benefits relationship, with"
"wanna hurt her," confronting" → "wanna hurt her", confronting"
"felt that the lyrics were" → "felt that the lyrics are"

Reception

Remove excess speech mark after the song's title
"received generally positive reviews from music critics." → "was met with generally positive reviews from music critics." with the pipe
Use different terminology than "of" at points to be less repetitive for reviewer introductions
"described the song as a" → "called "I Don't Wanna Be in Love" a" to be less repetitive
Revolt should not be italicised
"while Rap-Up found it" → "whereas the staff of Rap-Up found the song to be"
Pipe Rap Radar to Elliot Wilson (journalist)
"she was "afraid" → "she is "afraid"
"it entered US" → "The song entered the US" per no traction being directly sourced
"a total of eleven weeks" → "a total of 11 weeks" per MOS:NUM

Track listing

Good

Credits and personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

Weekly charts

See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Wikilink Adult R&B Songs

Release history

See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Format → Format(s)
Label → Label(s)
Digital download and streaming need various Apple citations to back this up
Pipe Urban contemporary radio to Urban contemporary music

References

Copyvio score looks solid at 24.8%!!!
Cite Atlanta Black Star as work/website instead on ref 2
Author-link Verzuz on ref 3 and fix MOS:CAPS issues
Remove the publisher from ref 4 and cite last name followed by first/middle for consistency
Cite Billboard as work/website instead on ref 6 and pipe to Billboard (magazine)
Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 7
Author-link Keyshia Cole on ref 9
Cite SOHH as publisher instead on ref 10
Remove ref 13 because it is an actual duplicate of ref 12 and only one source is needed for the first release claim anyway
keyshiacole → Vevo on ref 14, with the wikilink
Ref 15 should be laid out the same as the others with the archive, adding a title, access-date and publisher of BDSRadio (pipe to Broadcast Data Systems]]
Cite Apple Music as publisher instead on ref 17 and add various citations from the platform, placing countries in brackets instead of using the location parameter, i.e. (US)
WP:OVERLINK of Rated R&B on ref 19
Cite Revolt as publisher instead on ref 20
Pipe Rap Radar to Elliot Wilson (journalist) on ref 23

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:07, 17 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake:, per your directions, I have now fixed the issues. I hope that everything looks fine now. Fullmoon211 (talk) 03:55, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Fullmoon211 This looks mostly good and I did some copy editing, but you still need to change the second usage of "described the song as a" in the reception section's first sentence per my instructions, author-link Keyshia Cole on her tweet ref and cite SOHH as publisher instead. --K. Peake 07:06, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Fullmoon211 (talk) 13:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass now, good job on implementing everything! --K. Peake 06:54, 20 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]