Talk:I Don't Give A/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:44, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

General

Info box

The recording studios should be for example "Sam West Studios, London, England;". The studio should be written first, not in brackets and not small.
Hip-hop before Pop, as H is before P

Lead

If it is a Pop song with electronic and hip hop beats, then it's not a hip hop song, so that should be removed from the info box.
"Lyrically... ;the lyrics" → Try and phrase this differently so you don't use the same word twice so close.
Although not released as a single, due to digital downloads from its parent album, the song has charted on the South Korean Gaon Chart. → Too long winded for no reason, doesn't need three clauses. Change to: Following the release of MDNA, the song peaked at number 117 in South Korea.

Background and development

In July 2011, Solveig → Where is his first name? And link it too.
Martin Solveig commented → On the contrary, his first name should not be used from now on in the article. Only the first time.

Composition and lyrical interpretation

Solveig's first name shouldn't be here and shouldn't be linked, as it was in the previous section.
Can you check that Minaj is credited as a writer as Onika Maraj, that's her legal name and is what she is always credited as a writer as. Nicki Minaj is a stage name.
with Martin Solveig providing additional synths & drums. → Just use his surname
seeing her running through her insane schedule as a celebrity supermom,[14] involving single-mum childcare, meeting the press, gym, tweeting on elevators, and many others activities. → Are these all your own words? Sounds really bias, "her insane schedule as a celebrity supermom"

Critical reception

Why is the (magazine) bit present for Time Out ?? It shouldn't be there.

Live performance

performed the song... performance of the song → Sounds too similar, needs to be reworded
Madge grabbed a guitar for Nicky Minaj → Spelling mistake for Nicki

Credits and personnel

Recording location is not management

Charts

In South Korea, the song debuted at number 117 on the Gaon International Downloads Chart, selling 3,101 copies. → Following the release of MDNA, "I Don't Give A" debuted on the South Korea Gaon Single Chart at number 117 during the week of 25 to 31 March 2012, due to digital download sales of 3,101.
I have re-formatted the reference for this so it is easier than telling you how to do it. Also, the webcite archive is the wrong page, it shows 1-100, not 101-200 chart positions, and this song peaked at 117, so that needs to be fixed.

References

Instead of {{reflist|2}} use {{Reflist|30em}}, it's a lot cleaner and clearer

FN1: Needs a publisher which is Prometheus Global Media
FN2: MTV News should not be italics, and it needs a publisher which is Viacom
FN5: Needs a publisher which is Buzz Media
FN6: Unlink Billboard, it's the second time in the refs, and add the publisher
FN9: Star Observer needs a publisher
FN10: Same as FN2, should not be italics and needs an unlinked Viacom
FN11: Needs a publisher
FN12: Needs a publisher
FN13: Needs a publisher
FN14: Needs a publisher
FN15: Same as FN10
FN16: Same as FN10
FN18: Needs a publisher
FN20: Why is Time Out piped with (magazine) on show? Also needs a publisher
FN21: This is how they should all be, both the work and publisher parameters are present. Always do this.
FN23: ?? Should be Billboard and Prometheus Global Media
FN24: PopCrush should not be italics and should be linked and needs a publisher
FN28: Needs a publisher

Status

Failing, article is not ready for GA. Far too many mistakes and basic errors which should not be present. — AARON • ^TALK 17:43, 8 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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