Talk:I Am (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 18:33, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I propose to take on this review and will look at the article now. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:33, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. — Calvin999 18:57, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

First reading

In general, this article is well-written and altogether satisfactory, and rather better than the other article of yours that I reviewed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:09, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

"Lyrically, "I Am" is about how the feelings and emotions Lewis experienced following her departure from her former record label Syco and its boss, Simon Cowell." - This sentence is ungrammatical.
- I've tweaked the sentence. — Calvin999 19:15, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Island released the "I Am" on 17 July 2015" - I don't think the "the" is necessary.
"The violins were performed" - I don't think the word "performed" should be used.
Wikilink - Kobalt Music Group,
""I Am" premiered on BBC Radio 2 on 17 July." - I suggest you add 2015.
"download for anyone who who had previously pre-ordered the album" - Repeated word.
"However, Michael Clemons of The Daily Reveille thought that while it is not a stand out track, it is a good listen." - All the other comments are in the past tense while this one is in the present tense.
- Addressed all. — Calvin999 19:15, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria

The article is well written and complies with MOS guidelines on prose and grammar, structure and layout.
The article uses reliable third-party sources, and makes frequent citations to them. I do not believe it contains original research.
The article covers the main aspects of the subject and remains focussed.
The article is neutral.
The article has recently been expanded by the nominator and is stable.
The single image has a fair use rationale.

Final assessment - I am satisfied with the improvements made during the review and believe this article meets the GA criteria. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:05, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]