Talk:IMac G4/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: David Fuchs (talk · contribs) 18:28, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 16:14, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I'll be reviewing this article as part of the ongoing GAN backlog drive. --Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 16:14, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Initial comments

• There is unlikely any copyright violation in the article. Earwig's Copyvio Detector has reported only 20.6% in similarity.
• There are no cleanup banners, such as those listed at WP:QF, in the article.
• The article is stable.
• No previous GA reviews.

General comments

• Prose, spelling, and grammar checking.
  • No issues were found in the lede.
  • "15 inch, 17 inch, and 20 inch..." → 15-inch, 17-inch, and 20-inch...
  • There is a missing space at the beginning of the second sentence in the last paragraph of the "Release" section.
  • The rest of the article looks good. I did not find any grammar errors.
• Checking whether the article complies with MOS.
  • Optional: Add alt texts to the images in the article.
  • Optional: I feel like the Specifications section should be somewhere more up in the article. Reception and legacy should be at the bottom.
  • The article complies with the MOS:LEDE, MOS:LAYOUT, and MOS:WTW guidelines. There is no fiction and embedded lists within the article, so I am skipping MOS:WAF and MOS:EMBED.
• Checking refs, verifiability, and whether there is original research.
  • References section with a {{reflist}} template is present in the article.
  • No referencing issues.
  • Listed references are reliable. Good job on archiving refs.
  • Spotchecked Ref 8, 9, 13, 23, 42, 47, 54, 67, 70–all verify the cited content. AGF on other citations.
  • Optional: Fix the order of references in the text. "[50][38][11]" → "[11][38][50]"
  • Copyvio already checked.
• Checking whether the article is broad in its coverage.
  • I always like reading articles like this.
  • "although it can also boot into OS 9" Ref 9 mentions the reason, in order to access older Mac software. I feel like this could be added.
  • The article addresses the main aspects, and it stays focused on the topic.
• Checking whether the article is presented from an NPOV standpoint.
  • The article meets the criteria and is written in encyclopedic language.
• Checking whether the article is stable.
  • As noted in the initial comments, the article has been stable.
• Checking images.
  • All looks good.

Final comments

@David Fuchs: Overall, a very good article. There are a couple of things to fix. Once this gets addressed, I'll promote the article. The review will be on hold for a week. --Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 13:59, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Hey Vacant0, thanks for the review. I believe I've addressed all of the above except the comment about the specifications; at the end is where the wikiproject puts them. I'm not opposed to a different place for it, but I think that's a conversation beyond the scope of this GAN, as it would impact a lot of good and featured content (e.g. Power Mac G4 Cube, PowerBook 100.) Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ^talk 19:24, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Okay, good to know. Promoting. --Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 21:57, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

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