Talk:Hypertension/GA2
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- This page is way to technical. It is also over linked. Why say epistaxis when nose bleed would do fine as does not need linking?
- There are many refs grouped together when all that is needed is one good reference. Looking back at the previous GA assessment a number of aspects did not pass.
- There still remains many issue such as the absence of a discussion of hypertension emergencies / urgencies.
- Will review more completely if anyone is still interested...
Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 12:01, 13 December 2009 (UTC)