Talk:Hypericum iwatelittorale/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Fritzmann2002 (talk · contribs) 01:26, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Eewilson (talk · contribs) 20:24, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Discussion

• Description:
  • I removed a small redundancy.
  • YThey are a paler color on the undersides and have a papery texture. "They" is an unclear pronoun.
  • YThe length of stem between leaves is usually longer than the leaves themselves. Make it make sense.
  • There are dense, pale, point-shaped glands on the surface of the leaves... Pale? Is a color mentioned here?

• Double checked, it does say "laminar glands pale..."

Just a beginning of notes from my phone. More later. – Elizabeth (Eewilson) (tag or ping me) (talk) 04:56, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

Eewilson, looking forward to the full review. Fritzmann (message me) 18:54, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

I don't find any other issues. – Elizabeth (Eewilson) (tag or ping me) (talk) 22:01, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

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