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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hi, I will be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  18:25, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Checking against the GA criteria

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    The first paragraph of the early life section needs a citation
    "Since then, Iraq was not able to qualify to the World Cup" - this too needs a source
    " Saeed played all the 630 minutes of Iraq's 7 matches" - missing full stop
    " One of the documents even showed him and Al-Badri executing a mission" - remove 'even', sounds informal
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    No original research found.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Just a few minor issues to address, but other than this the article is looking great. On hold JAGUAR  18:30, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The issues pointed out in the (It is reasonably written well) section are now solved. Hashima20 (talk) 19:28, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, this looks ready to be promoted now. JAGUAR  19:32, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Really appreciate it! Hashima20 (talk) 19:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]