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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:22, 18 April 2016 (UTC)
A beautiful article. Only a few comments:
- Lead:
- I think "artillery" should be linked
- Not sure if smuggler needs a link
- In "16th century", quarter-slings is a duplink.
- I think you missed using endashes in the subheadings, or is my display troublesome?
Hardly any flaw, this is a true masterpiece. These addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:10, 19 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Sainsf! Artillery is now linked; I wasn't so convinced about smuggler. Quarter-sling is correctly a duplink, as quarter-sling doesn't have its own page. Enddashes are also fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 07:54, 23 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the fixes. No reason why this should have to wait anymore. Congrats! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 08:04, 23 April 2016 (UTC)