Talk:Hurricane Tico/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 20:09, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

• "After peaking as a Category 4 hurricane on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale early on October 19." - Sentence fragment; I would suggest rewording that to: "Early on October 19, Tico peaked as a Category 4 hurricane on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale".
• "Though, most of it's impact occurred in Mexico" - Change it's to its
• "14 miles (22 kilometres) in diameter," - Why isn't kilometres abbreviated?
• "Two 328 ft (100 m) anchored ships were washed aground by strong waves and swells.[11] with a total of seven ships reported missing." - Switch that period to a comma.
• "although mos tof the agricultural damage" --> "although most of the agricultural damage"
• "more evacuations to sheleters were anticipated." - typo
• To remain consistent with other references, switch "Roth, David" to "David Roth" in reference #2. However, I wouldn't touch reference #8 since it is with the "Most intense landfalling Pacific hurricanes" template.
• On reference #3, one of the authors is "Ethan J. Gibney1"; there shouldn't be a 1 on the end of his last name.
  • I fixed all of them with the exception of the last one, as I am having a hard time finding where the mistake is. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 20:43, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

Ok i went through and made your proposed changes. I could not find the Ethan Gibney 1 either.Millertime246 (talk) 21:04, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

oh, looks like you beet me to it. Good workMillertime246 (talk) 21:04, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

Ref 3 is with the ""Most intense landfalling Pacific hurricane" template. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:32, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

• Ok, everything is good now. That last thing I said was part of a template. Well, anyway, I will pass with article.--12george1 (talk) 01:47, 20 October 2011 (UTC)