Talk:Hurricane Hector (2006)/GA1

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Good work overall. There are some fairly minor issues that are listed below.

The lead could probably be condensed to one paragraph.
Dvorak classifications were initiated on August 15 as the system became more convective. - Link "convective" (atmospheric convection).
Be sure the footnotes occur directly after the punctuation, with no space.
At its second advisory Hector was forecasted to reach a peak of 45 mph for a while. - Remove "for a while".
While continuing west-northwestward, the hurricane quickly intensified, and it is estimated that Hector reached its peak intensity of 95 kt at 0600 UTC August 18, while centered about 900 n mi southwest of the southern tip of Baja California. - Change the kt to mph and km/h, and add a conversion from n mi to mi.
The remnant circulation of Hector dissipated on August 24 about 750 miles (1,207 km) east of the Hawaiian Islands. - Round the conversion.
Format ref #2 properly.

For now, I'll put the article on hold. These should be easy to address. Cheers, –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 05:03, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

All fixed. X clamation point 05:16, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

One more thing. You list Franklin as the author for all the references, which is incorrect for many of them. For the public discussions and advisories, look for author information at the bottom of the page. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 14:12, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. X clamation point 15:27, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good.

Passing. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 19:09, 8 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]