Talk:Hurricane Bud (2006)
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GA Review
[edit]- This review is transcluded from Talk:Hurricane Bud (2006)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Once again, this article is well-written and is enjoyable to read. A few things came up, but nothing major:
- The lead contains a split infinitive: "to rapidly intensify." I would normally correct this to "to intensify rapidly", but I wanted to make sure that it would still use the term correctly.
- In the the second paragraph of "Meteoroligcal history", a word seems to be missing after "though" in "though was slightly restricted to the east".
- I can follow most of the article from a non-weatherguy perspective, but I got a little lost in "...which was enveloped within by a complete ring of cold cloud tops. A small cyclone, the wind field contracted somewhat at around the same time."
- The wikilink to Bud in the "Impact" section doesn't seem helpful, as it links to an article about plant buds.
- I don't understand the last two sentences of the "Impact" section. Could they be rephrased to make them a little more user-friendly?
- In the references section, "National Hurricane Center" should be wikilinked on its first use, not its last.
I will place the nomination on hold to give you a chance to address or discuss these concerns. Questions and comments can be left here, as I've got the page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 20:58, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- I've fixed points #2 and #4, and changed the first one to what you suggested. Not sure if it takes away from the term; I'll leave it to more of a hurricane guru, feel free to switch back. Thanks, Jamie☆S93 21:34, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- I got everything else. Thanks for the help, Jamie. :-) –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 21:43, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you both for the quick reply. The article now meets all GA criteria, so I am promoting it. Congratulations! GaryColemanFan (talk) 05:11, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- I got everything else. Thanks for the help, Jamie. :-) –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 21:43, 11 October 2008 (UTC)
3rd named storm?
[edit]1st paragraph says Bud was the 3rd named storm of the season. How is that? Is Tropical Depression Two-E being counted as the 2nd? --LarryJeff (talk) 19:15, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
Merge?
[edit]It was a C3, but it didn't do anything, and its MH wasn't particularly interesting. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:18, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
- Meh, the season article is long enough as it is. Why make it longer? YE Pacific Hurricane 16:01, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
- Bud's section is short though. It wouldn't add all that much. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:05, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
- Meh, the season article is long enough as it is. Why make it longer? YE Pacific Hurricane 16:01, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
Wait this article still exists? I saw it on my watchlist this morning, which wasn't pleasant to see. YE Pacific Hurricane 17:32, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
- I merged the content, so the article can be "merged" (Delisted as GA and redirect to season article). ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:59, 22 June 2018 (UTC)