Talk:Hurricane Bertha (1990)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"Hurricane Bertha caused minor damage in the United States, Bermuda, and Atlantic Canada in July and August 1990. " delink United States, major place. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"On July 31 and August 1, little significant change in intensity occurred. " then why is it in the lead? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Conditions favored further intensification, and it is estimated the depression strengthened into Tropical Storm Bertha early on July 28, based on a nearby ship report." suggest re-wording to "Conditions favored further intensification, and based on ship reports, it is estimated the depression strengthened into Tropical Storm Bertha early on July 28." Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"he Canadian Hurricane Centre (then called the Maritimes Weather Center) and National Hurricane Center began to issue warnings for Nova Scotia and most of Atlantic Canada on July 31 and August 1.[4][5] " change "Canadian Hurricane Centre" to "Maritimes Weather Center" and remove the parenthesis. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"in North Carolina, the storm produced waves of 25–50 feet (7.6-15.2 meters)." abbreviate units. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link to the 1990 AHS Timeline in the see also. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:07, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I fixed everything you suggested. Thanks for the review,--12george1 (talk) 20:17, 22 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]