Talk:Hurricane Arthur/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Any reason you choose "became" and not "was" in the first sentence?
"The storm then trekked swiftly northward" - looks more northeast
Why no link to US$ in the lead?
Where did the initial low form from? A front? A trough? Check the TCR, it has more on origins.
How close did Arthur get to Florida?
"completed its conversion to an extratropical system at 12:00 UTC as it moved over the Bay of Fundy.[8] The NHC subsequently issued its final advisory on the storm and shifted warning responsibility to the Canadian Hurricane Centre,[27] which reported that Arthur came ashore at Meteghan at 10:30 UTC" - so did Arthur move ashore while tropical according to CHC? Or was it ET there too? Just trying to figure out timing.
Why no mention of the 1901 storm whose record Arthur broke? (earliest NC hurricane) (per TCR)
The rainfall map shows the heaviest rainfall occurring in South Carolina, but there is no mention of the state

All in all a great read! It should be easy to fix up. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, Hink! I think I got to everything, but could you double check my math on the damage total? Not sure why I got a $10 mil difference now from earlier. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 16:42, 8 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]