Talk:Howard Knox Ramey/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:12, 14 March 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

   Can you add either an OCLC # or ISBN to Maurer?

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

   Did he marry or have children? When exactly did he take command of IV Bomber Command?

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

1. . It says "He was commander of the IV Bomber Command from 12 August 1942 to 8 November 1942"
   • Sorry, I meant V Bomber Command
     • Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:20, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
2. . He was married, with two daughters. I have no idea what his wife's name was
   • Then add that somewhere.
     • Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:20, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
3. . I have added an ISBN and an OCLC. In answer to your unwritten question, yes it really is his name.
   • Nothing unwritten about it; I have a hardcopy myself.

Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:26, 14 March 2010 (UTC)

• Oh, and please fix this: Howard Knox Ramey was born in Waynesboro, Mississippi on 26 March 1943 --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:19, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
  • Ooops. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:20, 14 March 2010 (UTC)