Talk:How Will I Know/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead & infobox

• Record label is a pretty common term in a music article, so it doesn't need to be linked

 Done

• Say that it also reached the top ten in Sweden, Norway, and United Kingdom, and the top twenty in the Netherlands, New Zealand and Switzerland.

 Done

• "The 3rd MTV Video Music Awards" --> 1986 MTV Video Music Awards

 Done

• "in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Best New Artist in a Video", and won in the category of "Best Female Video"." ---> in the categories of "Best Female Video" and "Bets New Artist in a Video," winning the previous category.

 Done

• Use of synths does not make a song synthpop.

 Done

Background

• remove "she said" and just merge into one quote.

 Done

• "that they relinquish" Sounds weird.. should it be that they would relinquish" ?

Corrected it to that they should relinquish.

• Aretha album needs to be italicized.

 Done

• Lots of instances where she is referred to as "Whitney." Make it non personal and state "the singer" or "Houston."

 Done

Composition

• It says and is linked to dance here but in the infobox it is dance-pop. Which one?

Dance-pop.  Done

• I question the reliability of Pandora, which I left on your talk.

Removed Pandora references.  Done

Critical reception

• I don't see the purpose of putting some words in the [ ] brackets. If the writer made a mistake or something use the [sic] temp.

 Done

Chart performance

• On the issue date --> On the issue dated

 Done

Everything else unnoted is good! Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:32, 27 December 2010 (UTC)