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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • For the infobox, I suggest using "plainlist" instead of <br />.
  • The lead also needs to be expanded to better summarize the article.

History

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  • Remove the comma after "Park Dairy".
  • "to producing" → "on producing"
  • Add a comma after "different varieties".

Operations

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  • "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)


  • "that features" → ", which features"


  • "popular to" → "popular in"


Guinness Record attempt

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  • "[21] . [22][23][24]" → "[21][22][23][24]"
  • Those videos near the bottom look messy on my screen and I'm not sure if they're necessary.

References

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  • There are multiple references with [dead permanent link] tags, so I would find replacements.
  • Archive all archivable (either manually or with this tool).

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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