Talk:Hoop Dreams/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:30, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:30, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

The image is appropriately tagged.

• FN 52 links to a blog; the link is dead, which is not in itself a problem for GA, but if it's a blog it's not a reliable source.
• "James was able to leverage a relationship the vice president of the MacArthur Foundation": looks like a word is missing here?

Those are the only concerns. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:00, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for the review Mike Christie. I fixed the typo, removed the blog source, and slightly rewrote the last section to only use information from the Kartemquin press release. Ruбlov (talk • contribs) 12:02, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

Fixes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 12:09, 16 August 2022 (UTC)