Talk:Homer Simpson in: "Kidney Trouble"/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:23, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• "In reality, Grampa's bladder- not kidneys- would have ruptured from "holding it in"." Does a character say this in the episode, or it the writer's own tangent? Not sure if it belongs here
• Remember sentences with quotes need to end with citations
• Make sure there's consistent date formatting (i.e. ref 6 compared to 7)

I made a few minor tweaks myself, and am placing the review on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 16:12, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

All done! Thanks for the review! :) Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:34, 19 July 2011 (UTC)

Pass for GA. Nice work! Ruby2010 comment! 18:31, 19 July 2011 (UTC)