Talk:Homansbyen Depot/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Words like "forge" and "depot" need to be wikilinked (done)
In English, buildings are not drawn, but designed (fixed)
As the article is called "Homansbyen Depot", I've changed many instances of "Kristiania Sporveisanlæg" to that
In the first paragraph of "facilities", all the sentences start with "the". Try varying a bit more.
Stick in commas (not spaces) to separate thousands (e.g. 12,000)
Links should only be linked once, unless very far from each other (i.e. much longer articles than this)
Try to avoid very short paragraphs. Single-sentence paragraphs are never acceptable, and preferably they should be at least four sentences or so.

I've fixed everything I came across, so I'm granting a "good article" status. Congratulations! Arsenikk ^(talk) 13:05, 28 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]