Talk:Hold On to Sixteen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rcej (talk · contribs) 06:09, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

Very Nice. The placement and caption of Agron's is sort of awkward, though. Should avoid cramming it against the infobox; and since any major character may be the focus any episode, this reads redundantly: "Quinn (Dianna Agron, pictured) has a major role in this episode." How about we remove Agron, put the Overstreet img in plot, and maybe a John Schneider img in production? Rcej (Robert) – talk 07:16, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. As for the images, Agron was placed there early in the plot's life before I got to it; I need to be more proactive about such things, including their captions. Were you proposing starting the Overstreet image down one paragraph, so it doesn't cram? (If we did, the caption should change, perhaps: "Sam Evans (Chord Overstreet, pictured)" returns to McKinley High in this episode".) Alternatively, Agron's caption, which is indeed weak, could change to something along the lines of "Quinn (Dianna Agron, pictured) makes a life-altering decision in this episode", though the photo is awkwardly placed.

I suppose we could come up with an imagine of John Schneider, but he's only in that one scene. I'd probably be more inclined to leave Production without an image; it isn't necessary to have one in each segment.

I think I'll do a quick edit along these lines, absent the Schneider; if you like it, let me know. BlueMoonset (talk) 07:53, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

• Nope...no Schneider. Trouty mouth in plot is just right ;) Rcej (Robert) – talk 10:06, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Results of review

GA review (see here for criteria)

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The article Hold On to Sixteen passes this review, and has been promoted to good article status. The article is found by the reviewing editor to be deserving of good article status based on the following criteria:

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: Pass