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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 17:01, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    "because they were denied entry to Palestine by the British Government for not having entry permits.[1]" -> For me the last part conveys the same meaning as the first part; they were denied because they were not permitted to enter is the same. Do you know why they were denied? I can think why but if you don't find any useful information I propose to delete the last part of this sentence. --GoPTCN 11:44, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Removed last part. -- BCS (t · c · !) 20:29, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Ref 2 says 127, not 128.--GoPTCN 11:44, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Changed. -- BCS (t · c · !) 20:29, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    The author of the picture is needed. If you don't know the name then simply write that the author is unknown
    Fixed. -- BCS (t · c · !) 21:25, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Overall: On hold
    Pass/Fail:
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