Talk:Hill Women

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A fact from Hill Women appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 13 February 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting Hill Women appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp (pictured)?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Hill Women.

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 19:09, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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1978 postage stamp

~~... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting of poor graceful women appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp?~~ Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Pipe Lake–Lake Lucerne

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 09:24, 27 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Hill Women; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

Starting review. Updates to follow. Ktin (talk) 17:56, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Firstly, nice work by the nominator. Article meets eligibility criteria. Has been created within the last 10 days. The image is a classic, and is sourced to the GOI's open digital license. Image is good to go to the mainpage. Earwig shows no issues with copyvio. I am assuming good faith on some of the offline sources used in the article. Have no reasons to suspect any of those. The hook itself is interesting. Noting a few edits that will be required below. Article can do with some edits, I will note them below as well. Once the hook is remedied, I think this is good to go. Notes follow. Ktin (talk) 18:19, 27 January 2024 (UTC) Notes:[reply]

Hook:
- The hook states poor graceful women. Correct me if I am wrong, but, this seems to be a subjective interpretation of the painting's title. I would recommend switching back to the painting's title or if the artist herself has referenced this painting by a different name, we can use that one.
Article lede:
- The second part of the lede appears a tad WP:PROSELINE and can be tightened. e.g., currently it reads In xxxx, ... In xxxx, ... etc.
- Minor - can we also introduce what the painting is about in the lede itself?
Article body:
- Can the composition section be augmented with any interpretation / notes that the artist might have mentioned about the work itself? Given that Sher-Gill is a relatively modern artist, do we have any notes from interviews etc? Currently, the section ends abruptly with one of the women's lips appearing to be pouting.
- Do we have any notes about where the painting currently resides?

@Whispyhistory: Overall, this is nice work. Handing it back to you for some tweaks. Ktin (talk) 18:19, 27 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting of Hill Women appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp?

Thank you @Ktin:. Adjusted hook and will check rest soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:39, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1 looks good. Let me know when some of the edits are done. Will mark this hook as approved. Ktin (talk) 08:06, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1a... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting Hill Women (pictured), appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp? Whispyhistory (talk) 13:53, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1b... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting Hill Women, appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp (pictured)?

Made a minor edit to note that the stamp is being pictured rather than the painting. Marking ALT1b as approved. Ktin (talk) 17:43, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Note to promoting admin / editor. Given the work, I would recommend that we wait for a picture slot to promote this hook with the image, unless the nominator thinks otherwise. Ktin (talk) 17:45, 28 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ktin:... Thank you for reviewing. Is it any better now please? Whispyhistory (talk) 17:55, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work. Good to go. Ktin (talk) 03:45, 1 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How did Amrita Sher-Gil's personal experiences and observations of poverty in Simla influence the composition and thematic elements of her painting 'Hill Women'? Gracekline (talk) 01:01, 9 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]