Talk:Hilary Linstead

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Copyright problem removed

Prior content in this draft duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: https://deadline.com/2022/08/hilary-linstead-dead-at-84-baz-luhrman-jane-campion-agent-1235095162/ https://variety.com/2022/film/global/hilary-linstead-dead-dies-picnic-at-hanging-rock-casting-director-1235344533/. Copied or closely paraphrased material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.)

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Comment: Done. –CaroleHenson (talk) 05:31, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: I just ran earwig and realized that the tool is not picking up copy-and-paste scenarios from Variety anymore, but the main page now shows copy-and-paste scenarios from Deadline. I will work on those real quick. –CaroleHenson (talk) 05:08, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: How does the article right now? I did the best I could think of without adding more content and sources to set the information apart. –CaroleHenson (talk) 05:02, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: I posted this on the creator's user talk page:
It looks like the biggest problem is list of things, like "writers, directors, composers, choreographers, and cinematographers." which could be summarized to "people in the film industry" - or whatever would be correct for that scenario.
There are also hits on the names of works. You're good if it's just one name of a work, but where there are two or more from the same source, you just need to find a way to word it so it doesn't look like a copy-and-paste - perhaps summarizing a bit of information from the source about each of the works and put it in two sentences? Perhaps.
I hope that helps. It would be nice to save it, if that's possible, otherwise a tag for copyright violations will probably mean that the draft will be deleted soon.
Is this a workable solution GMH Melbourne?–CaroleHenson (talk) 02:47, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
:They may not be online right now, so I am going to make some edits and see how that goes.–CaroleHenson (talk) 03:50, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: The article seems to be notable. A couple more good-quality sources will help better establish that. But unfortunately, there are just too many long sentences identical from the Variety article. GMH Melbourne (talk) 01:38, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]